Saturday 28 July 2007

Chapter 2

"Mum whats wrong with her?" Kelly asked. "Its a premature birth,sorry Kelly I don't think either her or the the foal will make it" replied Maxine Frost. Sunshine Bay grunted for another hour. As soon as the foal could breathe her mother let her in to see the weak foal.The copper coloured foal couldn't even stand up yet which is very unusual because foals normally stand straight away. "I'll have to call the vet to get the foal put down"said Maxine. "NO!!"shouted a tearful Kelly "I will look after him for as long as it takes.""Well okay then but don't be disappointed when he dies" said Maxine "I'll have the vet come out to have a look at him anyway. The next morning Kelly awoke in the little colts stall. Sunshine Bay had to put down and Kelly was full of greif. Mrs Maxwell said that the foal has a 20% chance of living. Kelly had decided to name the foal Sun Burst Bay or Sunny for short. Kelly looked after him every day and he seemed to look stronger each time she looked at him.

4 comments:

Nicola Harvie said...

That is such a cute name!!!!!!

Jess said...

Love your writing Ellen, it's fantastic, wish I could write like you. How long does it take you to write a chapter? Hope the baby foal is o.k!

Ellen said...

Hi Jess it only takes 20 minutes - half an hour i kind of just write what ever comes to me.

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